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Nicholas Warren's avatar

Very interesting!

Kayleigh Thorpe's avatar

That's fucking terrifying XD

I have a soft spot for unreliable narration especially first person. Delivered. In. Spades.

Stars. Standard :3

It feels inevitable. What ever it is. The description was perfect, minimalist, it really reminds me of the 'men with sticks and rope' from the UK version of behind human. Something that's mentioned similar to this, but just invokes dread in much a similar way that you've dropped onto my lap.

Love it.

Shannon Black-Youel's avatar

eeeek thank you my pal <3 and ooh!! I just googled and I’m gonna have to watch!! Thank you for reading and being amazingly kind as always.

Kayleigh Thorpe's avatar

It’s brilliant,

A. A young Aiden Turner. Yes please

B. A ghost, Vampire and a Werewolf living in Bristol XD

C. I can think of zero problems with any of it. :D

Shannon Black-Youel's avatar

ooooh sign me up. sold.

Inga Jones Writes Thrillers's avatar

Love the voice here. Very conversational and immersive. I could picture the scene very well.

Shannon Black-Youel's avatar

Thanks so much for this feedback, Inga!