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Colin Ellis Cuming's avatar

Great tension in this entry, Shawn! I started thinking about The Relic…

Shawn Brooks's avatar

Thank you!! I wasn’t consciously thinking of the Relic but now that you say that I’m positive it was somewhere in my brain as I wrote it.

M.O.Stewart Writes Dark Stuff's avatar

Ohhh now the ghosts are awake!

Shawn Brooks's avatar

And maybe more…

M. Majeris's avatar

Whoa, I guess the tiptoeing around is done and the actual raw horror action is in. Love it.

Shawn Brooks's avatar

Thanks ! Only because you and others built up the tension enough for me to break it !

Nicholas Warren's avatar

Fantastic! Very haunting, and I can’t wait to finish off the story! I spoke with Adam, and I’ll be writing episode 10! :)

Shawn Brooks's avatar

Awesome and thank you! Whoever writes next I’m down for it haha.

Colin Ellis Cuming's avatar

Hmmm? I was told I was supposed to write for the 13th, but if you want to do it, sounds good to me.😊

Colin Ellis Cuming's avatar

Ohhh and nice to talk to you, Nicholas!

Nicholas Warren's avatar

Oh? He told me the same thing, that's quite confusing. Should we ask?

Colin Ellis Cuming's avatar

I just did. But it’s okay. He might have just gotten it confused. Or asked more than he remembered. It’s all good, at any rate.

You sound really excited to write it. I honestly would prefer that you use your excitement. I don’t want to take that way. Use it, brother!

Adam Tuhy's avatar

Yeah definitely got confused. Very sorry everyone!

Colin Ellis Cuming's avatar

No worries, Adam!

Adam Tuhy's avatar

I have the memory of a goldfish you'll have to excuse me lol.

Nicholas Warren's avatar

I see, I apologize. I am rather excited, and I hope I’m able to create an ending that can bring it all together quite well, and one I hope you will enjoy reading as well! If you’re a fan of horror writing, we should stay in touch :) It’s wonderful to have like-minded acquaintances!

Colin Ellis Cuming's avatar

I look forward to reading it! It’s been an interesting ride with the history and the creature.

I am a big Clive Barker fan. Also McCammon.

Nicholas Warren's avatar

I’ve been meaning to get into Clive Barker! I’m more of a Stephen King fan at my core, but also Shirley Jackson, EAP, and Lovecraft as well!